(À la 1960s)
Because I am having too darn much fun with these...
Instructions:
Read between the lines.
(Or between the words, as the case may be.)
Very good. Now let's begin the story:
THE NEFARIOUS MR. BLANK
(Though one would be forgiven for doubting the same.)
As it so happened the comedy, The Misanthrope, was being shown in the local theatre, but Mr. Blank did not see the humor in it. It served, rather, to accelerate his aggravation.
Everyone in the theatre gasped and scrambled beneath their chairs. Great masses of popcorn were heaved in the air.
But I tried.
He kept shooting. The police rushed to the theatre and quickly intervened. Mr Blank was wrangled to the ground, cuffed and brought to the lockup...
...where he denied any involvement and fabricated many stories.
(Particularly for his roommate, who stopped by police headquarters to wish him well. )
Mr. Blank's posturing was to no avail. He was booked for possession of a deadly weapon
with intent to kill.
Mr. Blank was promptly tried for his crime before a jury of his peers—including his roommate. The foreman, upon seeing Mr. Blank, thought him guilty. (Turns out, in this case, one could tell a book by its cover.)
Many people—among them, his roommate—carrying paddles, attended the courtyard celebration.
And also,
What was it about this sentence that he could not understand? He tried. He tried.
Mr. Blank was escorted out of the courtyard. There was much pomp and circumstance.
Mr. Blank probably should have said that he was
Now Mr. Blank will have plenty of time to read Robert Frost and write parodies of many classic poems. Every now and then, his roommate will drop by with news of Saratoga and a paintbrush and canvas. They will never discuss politics.
THE END
Bahahahahahaha...I love it!. It's kinda like a modernised version of the cut up fiction that Burroughs and Gysin used to use when they were zonked out of their gourds in North Africa.
ReplyDeleteJ girl you are one cool customer....they do look like fun :)
oh, i love this kind of stuff!
ReplyDeletethose flash cards have a bit of a dark side, no? or perhaps they were subtly altered? great stuff either way. i dig creative out of the box (why does it have to be a box?) takes on writing. :)
That was GENIUS! I enjoyed every word!
ReplyDelete(a funny story about that word, misanthrope. My good friend called me out of the blue to ask me what it meant, and I honestly thought she was poking fun at me...)
Dan- I just couldn't resist--those sentences are a hoot! But I promise I was perfectly sober when I pieced these together.
ReplyDeleteI've no doubt, Dan, I just know you could take these cards to town. Do them more justice than I. I think you should get your own set and fiddle like Burroughs & buds did.
Maybe we ought to resurrect that whole beat generation act. (Maybe that's already been done?) Maybe I'm thinking about this way too much and it's time for me to go to bed. ;)
Id- They are dark! Mad Men is written all over them! Absolutely no alterations--pulled them straight out of the box. I mean, how could I improve on these cards?! (Oy, I've got a thousand of them, too!) ;~o
ReplyDeleteNessa- That is funny! Now you can tell her about Mr. Blank. ;)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it!
Wow, that is even better than Refrigerator Magnet Poetry. I need a set of those cards!!
ReplyDeleteThis is great fun!
ReplyDeleteYou hardly ever hear a good word like "berserk" any more.
This was really cool. But I do feel sorry for Mr. Blank. Is that twisted or what?
ReplyDeleteVery clever idea. Mr Blank is just misunderstood.
ReplyDeleteI like Mr. Blank. Do you have an actor in mind for the movie version?
ReplyDeleteRobert- Aren't they fabulous. Here's another card:
ReplyDeleteCelibacy. Celibacy is obligatory for Roman Catholic priests.
Hahahahahaha! ;)
(I do not want to write a story with that card.)
Leonora- Berserk-so true! What do we say now? Psycho, crazed, bonkers... I don't know, I'm going berserk trying to think of a word. ;)
ReplyDeleteAngela dear-- You are a kind soul. I'll bet Mr. Blank would just love a visit from you.
ReplyDeleteMunk- Wow. Hmm... hadn't taken it that far. And I'm a little rusty in the actors department. I mean really, I'm looking at 1960's cards! How about Al Pacino? Loved that Dog Day Afternoon... ;-0
ReplyDeleteDicky- Misunderstood misanthrope. There's a lot of those guys out there. I'm not sure how I feel about trying to understand... ;)
ReplyDeletehaha - so cool with these word cards in between...such fun!!!
ReplyDeleteWow, very clever!
ReplyDeleteClaudia- Honestly, I felt kind of like a silly school girl when I set out to do this. It was a little fancy and I didn't expect to get beyond the first card I plucked from the box. But, well I couldn't very well start with repeating instructions verbatim without moving forward! ;)
ReplyDeleteKathleen- :~)
ReplyDeleteLaoch- Anything vintage inspires. ;)
ReplyDeleteTee hee! That was a hoot and I'm very tempted to try my hand at it. Good chance it'll come out dark and quirky in my hands.
ReplyDeleteThis was so clever! What a great story within those cards. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteMultifarious is such an awesome word. Truly.
ReplyDeleteLydia- Thanks. See, I'm working on fiction! ;)
ReplyDeleteDB- I quite agree. And I knew I could count on you to comment on the vocabulary words. ;)
ReplyDeleteNance- You? Dark and quirky? Get those vocab cards out! (When you've nothing better to do--which, I can't imagine is ever). Maybe we can start a new trend. Ha! :/
ReplyDeleteThat was so much fun to read! It reminded me of some writing games I used to play as a child. I can see you thoroughly enjoying yourself with the process of finding a story in the stack of cards. You might want to go into business reading people’s futures with those things;) Very clever Jayne. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWow -- I'm speechless. That was too cool!
ReplyDeleteCatching up... this is pure-genius work. With that many cards on hand, I bet you could build a whole separate blog (dare I say "book"?) around these "found stories"!
ReplyDeleteHahaha! But, OMG I can't believe there was a flash card that used berserk in a sentence that way! Imagine a card like that today. . .
ReplyDeleteLeah- Now that's an idea... fortune telling from flashcards! You think that would easily trend?
ReplyDeleteWhat I love about these old cards is not only the formality but also the un-PC-ness of them. They are so radical! ;)
JES- Dare you say? Hmm... That's all I'll say. ;)
ReplyDeleteNo wait, I can't say only that! I love how you wrapped found stories in quotes. Makes me think of the chalk-pastel-on-black-paper art piece that Michael and I bought nearly 20 years ago at a small art gallery in Chicago. The painter, whose work was known as Georgeart, came to art late and was self-taught. He created colorful, whimsical pieces (reminiscent of Matisse, Gauguin and other French impressionists, post-impressionists) on "found paper"--often right out of the local paper mill's dumpster. We were both struck by his folky style and materials--it was the first piece of art we purchased together and it was affordable.
Come to find out, George Colin's work has since become highly valued. Oprah Winfrey, Michael Jordan and some well-known politicians have purchased pieces. His art is on the cover of The Band's 1998 album, Jubilation. George went from laboring at the Pillsbury Mill to becoming an admired artist. It's just a fabulous story, isn't it?
Linda- I know! Not PC... no, no. Irreverent cards, they are.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the walk this morning. Cleared my head straight!